Retelling the moment in different orders was a good way to manipulate the time frame. All the parts fit really well together, so no matter what piece was told first, the story still made sense.
It was different, I liked the way you used different ways of telling the same story. Could have done something more with the time aspect. Over all nice job!
I love how they all told the story, like the metaphor of the hole punch and paper... and I liked the idea of the facial punctuation for aim- ties in with getting your ears pierced!
the one with you as a piece of paper is definitely my favorite. It's absurd (like you said), but the symbolism is clear. And funny. I think the weakest for me was the second one you showed us with the faces. I didn't really get how it contributed to the story as a whole.
I think that the one above with the smiley faces works well I like the text smiley faces showing your expression throughout the story. I also like how the story isn't really in order and so we find each part of the story out as we read each box.
I like how you put them in random order and used different visuals for each. It made it interesting by using the same words. I don't quite get the thing with the paper but it was a good concept to try.
I like how you did 3 very creative demonstrations of the story. The cartoons were well drawn, and the last one is cute with the smiley faces. I really enjoyed it!
I liked it, it was a creative way of telling the story and was different than most peoples. It was interesting how you told it in different orders. Good job!
I think the emoticon version is the strongest, in part because I can read it in multiple ways, and in part because it is also being told through emotions (well, in a silly way). The EEK comic also focuses on emotions, and even though it doesn’t follow the chronology of events that happened, I am drawn in by the need to fill in the gaps and imagine. The punched one is the least successful—I appreciate the attempt to paralell the hole punch with ear piercing, but it isn’t quite there—a little confusing,
Retelling the moment in different orders was a good way to manipulate the time frame. All the parts fit really well together, so no matter what piece was told first, the story still made sense.
ReplyDeleteIt was different, I liked the way you used different ways of telling the same story. Could have done something more with the time aspect. Over all nice job!
ReplyDeleteVery creative way of telling your story. The last narrative with the icons is very original, making your story different. Good job!
ReplyDeletei like the use of color to emphasize the work, i also think that the illustrations are well done and add to the piece.
ReplyDeleteI love how they all told the story, like the metaphor of the hole punch and paper... and I liked the idea of the facial punctuation for aim- ties in with getting your ears pierced!
ReplyDeletethe one with you as a piece of paper is definitely my favorite. It's absurd (like you said), but the symbolism is clear. And funny.
ReplyDeleteI think the weakest for me was the second one you showed us with the faces. I didn't really get how it contributed to the story as a whole.
I think that the one above with the smiley faces works well I like the text smiley faces showing your expression throughout the story. I also like how the story isn't really in order and so we find each part of the story out as we read each box.
ReplyDeletethe use of emoticons was very clever. Cool story and well executed.
ReplyDeleteI like how you put them in random order and used different visuals for each. It made it interesting by using the same words. I don't quite get the thing with the paper but it was a good concept to try.
ReplyDeleteI like how you did 3 very creative demonstrations of the story. The cartoons were well drawn, and the last one is cute with the smiley faces. I really enjoyed it!
ReplyDeleteI liked it, it was a creative way of telling the story and was different than most peoples. It was interesting how you told it in different orders. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI think the emoticon version is the strongest, in part because I can read it in multiple ways, and in part because it is also being told through emotions (well, in a silly way). The EEK comic also focuses on emotions, and even though it doesn’t follow the chronology of events that happened, I am drawn in by the need to fill in the gaps and imagine. The punched one is the least successful—I appreciate the attempt to paralell the hole punch with ear piercing, but it isn’t quite there—a little confusing,
ReplyDeleteGood use of metaphor/symbolism. The visuals are neat and cute but it could have been stronger with more details.
ReplyDeletegood job experimenting with perspective. i like the difference in information we receive from each narrative.
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